Juan Toosie

is Reaquainting myself with Bibliofaction and trying to Ignore One Tree Hill which my other half is watching in the background ...

And, is currently reading Transition by Iain Banks.

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06/01/2011Jeyssika
Don't know if you'll read this, I hope you do - I wrote a story called The Community and it shows how wonderful this site and the people on it can be - I hope it does anyway - I hope you read it :) Thank you.
05/01/2011Jeyssika
I do agree there can be a lot of flaws to this site but you lot still brighten up my day with your kindness.

I hope you're okay and that it all works out for you :) Goodnight Sir xx
04/01/2011Alan
A true poet of our time, you shall be missed. Good day my friend
04/01/2011Fats
Good night, God Bless . . . :)
04/01/2011Mikky J
Oh, that sounds cool. Yeah, please keep me posted.
04/01/2011Fats
I have thoroughly enjoyed my time on this site – unfortunately things have come to a head, and I realise that I must move on. The well is dry, the will has stumbled into darkness and I must concentrate on real life. To all who still follow the dream – I say carry on and go where I could not dare :) Love Rob.
04/01/2011Mikky J
Thanks, Juan. Agreed. I figured that's why some of the others have left, as well.

Have you found another place to post?

Let me know: momojojo@gmail.com.
04/01/2011Jeyssika
I genuinely am sorry you felt so strongly about what I meant in jest. I apologise as much as I can.
04/01/2011Jeyssika
Wow - hang on a second; sorry if you took this to heart I was more sticking up for the sheer definition of 'short story' but no sorry for giving you my opinion with a bit of fact in response to your opinion. Clearly I was wrong to think this was, what did you call it, a place to exchange ideas?

Sorry.
22/12/2010Alan
Please read my latest story "the voice in the night" and do tell what you think, I have taken on a more serious tone in my writing. Thank you, good day
22/11/2010Jeyssika
I don't know if you read it the first time, but anyway I re-published Ella under the new title 'The Chase'; I've added the feeling it was lacking & I far prefer this version.
Please read it if you get the chance and when I can sit down properly on here I fulllly intend on reading your screenplay :D xx
22/11/2010Jeyssika
Yeah I totally get what you mean. The reason PL was weird is because it turned into just that, I wanted both sides to add a bit of feeling, though Nico's next one is going to be much, much longer & she joins him in the end which should be fun.
The reason for the weird dialogue thing is because I started out with her narrating the same as Nico but it didn't feel right but as my sister pointed out she just sounded odd but I moved onto Nico again & decided to just leave her be. Glad you...
18/11/2010Jeyssika
Hey, check out Scotch then Pink Lemonade - they are the first two of a new Drink series I'm writing called 'Paint the Town Red' enjoy :D xx
08/11/2010Ricriv
Juan - many thanks for your tip very useful indeed... now I have to set about doing it.

Best wishes

Dick
05/11/2010Mikky J
Cronos. I dig Guillermo del Toro.

I've put it on my list. Thanks!
04/11/2010Mattius The Wise
Thanks mate, I think you got it.
03/11/2010Alan
Thanks for the comment old spice, you truely are a gentleman and a scolar. You have made a great friend in Jim Saville.
Until next time.

P.S: Elements of the past and the future combining to create something not quite as good as either.
10/09/2010Alan
I have asked nicely that you read my work and yet you continue to refuse.

Is it that my stories are far more superior than yours?

You have made a very powerful enemy in Jimmy Saville my friend.
31/08/2010Alan
I WILL NOT BE IGNORED.
Read my short stories, they are far greater than anything written by yee. You'll see. It will blow your mind.
31/08/2010Alan
I am the all conquering master of the written word, wordsmith of the blank page. Like Pollock to the blank canvas, or Dali from the dreamworld. All shall tremble before me
27/08/2010Alan
Check out my stories please, I think you'll find I have discovered a new form of writing. It's genius.
26/07/2010vik verplanken
Thanks for your comment on my story, I appreciate it ;)
17/07/2010MichaelG
No, you didn't offend me. I'm not easily offended. I was just commenting on it because I love that book. I've read it seven times.
24/05/2010DAVID DOUGLAS BROWN
Am I the first to notice your picture? How goes things with the Cartel? I thought you were dead man!
Anyway, thanks for reading my story. And please don't have me killed!
20/05/2010Nynetine
i finished chapter two today now if only i had enough to publish it...lol thanks for the tips and ill seek out that pesky inverted comma...hope you enjoy part two when and if i get it published, Cheers.
17/05/2010khayes2009
Hi, thanks for the comment. I hope you will enjoy reading some of my other work. I feel that my writing has improved with each passing story i write
Thanks again.
13/05/2010jacko
Hi. Thanks for the lovely comment. Your description of the older woman was exactly as I imagined her. Well done
Jacko
28/02/2010Goodgirl09
thanx glad you enjoyed it
20/02/2010pRITiQueEn
thank you for your comments,..i appreciate it..
18/02/2010Ricriv
Hi
Many thanks for your comment - it's so long since I wrote the piece I will have to re-read it but you're probably right in what you say. Good lesson for me to remember -don't watch Misdomer Murders.

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Fullname: Juan Toosie
Username: Fats
Gender: Male
Age: 30s

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Author: James Ellroy
Poem: Not Waving but Drowning
Quote: Anyone who lives within their means suffers from a lack of imagination.
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